COTN- TornSight New Ref

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Name: TornSight (Orginally JaggedPaw)
Age: 19 Moons
Personality: Tornsight is very shy, and sensitive. Some first opinions of him would be that he's 'Depressed' But that's not the case. He will in fact play, but that's mostly with the younger cats, since he feels like he can't, and will never fit in with cats his age. He won't stand up for just anyone, but when he wants or has to stand up, he will fight till the death like all of StarClan is in his paws. He is not stubborn, and will flex his mind and opinions to what others want. He's not known to state his opinions out loud, and is very quiet especially to things that he is uncomfortable with. He is constantly wanting to 'fit in' but (to him) he never sucecceds. When in danger he always puts himself first but most people underestimate this since they've never seen how well of a fighter he truely is. He is constantly a looked down at cat, not only because of his short size (He is only about 15cm tall) but because he does not know how to live and love properly.
Brief History: TornSight was born a regular RockyClan kit Except, he was the runt of his litter. He was constantly bullied through kit hood, and never knew what it was like to have a true friend. Soon after becoming an Apprentice, he was dared by a couple other apprentices to go find a cougar, and return with one of their whiskers. He only accepted to do this because he thought if he did return successfully with a whisker, he'd be at last accepted. As he left the camp and found a cougar, he attacked it. He nearly completed his task, but the cougar got to him first. Tearing up the left side of his face, the cougar won the battle, and left The broken apprentice bleeding nearly to death. He had to crawl back to the camp so he wouldn't die. When he entered the camp, he collapsed and the clan watched in widened eyes, as the apprentices who told him to get the whisker, were punished. He was forced to stay in the Medicine cats den for over 4 seasons, and still failed to heal correctly. TornSight was soon made a warrior, but never believed in himself that he could fully become a respectable warrior, especially for his clan.

Time Zone: Atlantic Daylight Time (ADT)

Relationships:
- Unknown/Unsure of
- Acquaintance
- Friend
- Close Friend
- Crush
- Love
- Hates/Dislikes Strongly

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Roleplay Sample:
(This will take place in the battle with the cougar, I'm sorry if it's really detailed )
The dim light faded through the rocks where the small apprentice walked. I'm sure there's a den here.. He thought blinking his eyes up to the sun. Then, a loud booming hiss was heard from behind. Whipping around, he was face to face with the ice blue eyed, dusty brown cougar. "Hello~" JaggedPaw smirked and cocked his head back and forth in a taunt. The cougar responded with a deep growl in a warning, which JaggedPaw ignored. Then with a quick swipe JaggedPaw hooked onto one of his whiskers. "Ha-" He was cut off by the Cougar large paw, that was much stronger (and bigger) then him. With on bash JaggedPaw was knocked onto the ground, skidding across the floor. A ear splitting screech echoed throughout the mountains. In rage, The cougar leaped at the small apprentice, but he was faster. Sliding out of the way The apprentice leaped onto the Cougar's face and clawed over his left eye. The cougar screeched in pain as the small scar drew blood over his eye, blinding him. Without any vision, The cougar quickly whacked JaggedPaw, claws unsheathed, right on the same side. JaggedPaw pulled back. Excruciating pain grew to where his eye was, or once was, placed. Blood, fur, and flesh was torn from his face as he fell back. He lay limp, flinching in pain, with his one remaining eye closed. Nobody was there to save him, nobody could help him, he was alone..and possibly bleeding to death. So fast..It all happened so fast... Gaining some strength in his front paws, he pulled himself along the rocks, guiding his way blindly. Slowly, painfully, and horrifying, he make his way back to the camp, not knowing where the cougar was, or where is may return. All he could hope was StarClan was watching, and guiding his paws to safety..All he knew was that nothing as a warrior, would be the same again...


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